Logo Critique Please

[Toad_1]

Please critique this logo with honesty, the more accurate the better. All you designers out there, now's your chance to show your know-how and expertise on the subject. (You know who you are.)

Background info:

Create a logo for a local ballpark and it's affiliated softball team.
Colors: Texas Orange / Black / White

Here are the concepts I've come up with, so far:

 

[Toad_1]

 

[Stretch19]

i like the jersey mock ups...thats a pretty dope 2 tone look

 

[Julio19]

Jerseys look really nice. Excellent job.

 

[toad_2]

Bro, I like the revisions. Are the logos that high on the chest because they want to show off their beer bellies JK
From the small mock-ups it looks like the logos are a little high but not bad. I have to pick on something. Loving the color combination, btw. Can't wait to see the final product. Keep us updated.

AJ22, you are going to look great on the field with those. You're getting your $$$ worth Just don't go to Sp*rts55 for printing, LMFAO...unless you get a deal from ego WITH a guaranteed shipping in writing or everything is free.

 

[Empire]

Top right on the jersey mock ups is my fav. good work

 

[consistencyplz]

I really like the stitching idea. You could also put the words on an outfield wall, that would look cool too.

 

[Toad_1]

Whoops. Forgot to add the numbers for viewing:

 

[Da Lead Moose33]

Whoops. Forgot to add the numbers for viewing:

all i see are red x's

 

[Pinstripe Pride]

I think all of these are amazing. But I am not a fain of the dotted line pattern on the shirt or the half color split on the front of the shirt. The back of the shirts look cool. The first graphic of the field logo with the green field in the back is great! Numbers are solid as well.

 

[Mikaka]

the UEX logos need some white to make it pop a little bit more, don't quite get the stitching idea. must be nice to have a team that has it's own ballpark. those jerseys are pretty slick. i've told ya before toad_1, you're pretty damn good at this here game

 

[toad_2]

all i see are red x's

That's because WI has boycotted MI. We're tired of you guys stealing our women. We've been forced into tipping cows to see if we can find a diamond in the rough

 

[toad_2]

Ooops...my fingers typed MI instead of MN...carry on

 

[oakleydude44]

all i see are red x's

Me too................

 

[Unleashed_19]

They look good, but I personally do not like the way the R looks, doesn't "flow" with the rest of the lettering, if that makes any sense.

 

[Zipperking]

Me too................

x3...........

 

[RColeman23]

all i see are red x's

same here

 

[RodeoClown]

red X's here too

maybe its because I banged half the skanks in LaCrosse

 

[aulee42]

red X's ben thats all i see

 

[Mikaka]

i see em just fine

 

[killa-B]

oh wat the hell

all i see is red xxxxxxxxxxxx's also.And to the top

 

[ballslinger]

those are some bad ass

red x's................................

 

[bdclubber]

The red x's that he posted when he designed our unis were way better than these red x's

 

[Toad_1]

They look good, but I personally do not like the way the R looks, doesn't "flow" with the rest of the lettering, if that makes any sense.

Makes perfect sense to me. I was given the 'R' logo to use, the rest is mine.

Here's what I was provided with: (created by another designer)

 

[Toad_1]

i see em just fine

You might have to figure out how to repost them for me, since it's quite obvious I fail. (Damn the red X's, they get me every time.)

 

[aulee42]

I really want to see this logo because ben you do some great work. If it all matters i can see this R lol!

Makes perfect sense to me. I was given the 'R' logo to use, the rest is mine.

Here's what I was provided with: (created by another designer)

 

[chksdigLongball]

They look good, but I think I would change that R around.

 

[smdstudios]

jerseys are the sickness.......

 

[Mikaka]

You might have to figure out how to repost them for me, since it's quite obvious I fail. (Damn the red X's, they get me every time.)

they're photobucket images. i can't do any better than what you have already

 

[Jobu]

These look great.